Sunday, September 1, 2013

REMAINS

Read me O reader
that I remain
like a wisp of fog
that once you saw
now no more remain
like a heartrending line
of a story
half forgotten
like haze memory
of a beautiful poem
So much so
at least
in a heart
ever settle
like a sigh
of a dream
that was to remain
A dream

5 comments:

  1. Remains of moments can be like precious shards vaguely framing some other time. Lovely.

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  2. Sometimes dreams DO remain just dreams...but hopefully they are comforting nonetheless.

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  3. nice...it is mystery in a good way...see only a bit and let it flow from there....to be a dream, a wisp you wont fully grasp

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  4. I like the idea of being remembered hazily - your closing lines really speak to me, as well.

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