Monday, March 4, 2024

Impressionable minds


It has  always been her 

I was moulded by her thoughts 

And started life 

dreaming through  her eyes 

How impressionable a mind 

was mine like every  child's 

She showed me stars and

the promises of Christmas night 

she taught me that there was

something good and something not so 

saw her love towards life 

Her appreciation of art 

Her generosity and kindness of heart 

How considerate a human can be

How just a woman can be 

Yet I saw the other side of her too 

How she struggled with her life 

How she fought a futile strife 

For a woman of her strength 

Yet to be but subservient 

For so far a woman shall rise

On my impressionable mind

It has always been her 

Whether for better 

Whether for worse

My beloved and most 

Dearest  mother 



Written for Poets and Storytellers United Friday Writings #116:Lasting  Impressions



11 comments:

  1. Your mother sounds like an exceptional woman. Gifting you with appreciation across a wide spectrum of life, from the promise of Christmas to appreciation of art. A Woman Who Would Run With The Wolve!!

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  2. A beautiful tribute to a very special person (your mother !)...Rall

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  3. Great tribute to a woman of indefatigable spirit

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  4. What a great blessing such a wonderful mother is!

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  5. A gorgeous, heartfelt tribute to Mother ... sigh.

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  6. The fact that she struggled, but still made her child's life glorious is a beautiful thing. Good mothers are the greatest miracle.

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  7. A heartfelt tribute. Nicely written.

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  8. How tough it must have been for her to show you the good things in life, when in her own, she struggled.

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  9. What a beautiful ode to your mother

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  10. Mothers are awesome. Quite often they are able to teach their children to do what they couldn't do.

    I live with a useful snake (NOT a pet) who avoids humans and eats nuisance animals. Mother taught us children not to be afraid of...him. (We think it's "him" because the snake eggs always appeared under a neighbor's porch.) I was forty years old when Mother admitted she always felt revulsed by the snake.

    Priscilla King

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