YOU SEE ME
YOU SEE ME NOT
THE ICE ABOVE
THE WATER BELOW
THEN YOUR SUNSHINE
I TAKE THE FORM
HAPPY AND GURGLING
JUMPING FROLICKING
THEN YOU TORTURE
ME TO KNOW FURTHER
MY SUSTENANCE
AND I TAKE DIFFERENT FORMS
I RISE ABOVE
IN SPIRIT FORM
TO REACH ABOVE
MY HEAVEN
AND THEN POURING DOWN
AGAIN WHEN
I AM NEEDED
AGAIN ANOTHER TIME
A powerful, intimate personification of rain! Delightful!
ReplyDeleteAhhh rain... love it :)
ReplyDeleteA delightful little story of rain. Nicely done.
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DeleteGood description of the "different forms"--especially:
ReplyDeleteHAPPY AND GURGLING
JUMPING FROLICKING
...creates a great picture.
thanks
DeleteI love the way you portray the different forms of water. Very imaginative - and accurate.
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DeleteOh water! An ode to the essence of physical life. Well done!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written!
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DeleteJossina,
ReplyDeleteA tribute to the greatest gift and much needed by so many, rain and water.
Having rain is so important, although here in the UK we have had so much recently, that we still await the sunshine of summer...
Eileen
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