Saturday, June 24, 2023

A story by the river

Written for Friday Writings #82 


Many a stories I had read 

And many have I loved 

There was this story the frog 

with a  princesses  kiss

turned to a magnificent prince 

And many such stories as these

led me to thinking far from a

reality someday later that hit me 

With passage of time 

And my choices changed 

I read of one 

Where my prince with a kiss 

turned to a frog 

Yes I should have 

known better 

That to err was common 

To rise was divine 

So I adored my princess 

Who cried, prayed and  said 

"By the river Piedra 

I sat down and wept" 



PS" By the river Piedra I sat down and wept" by Paulho Coelho is one among the many favorites of mine. 

23 comments:

  1. Princes and frogs, fairy tales and fantasy .... I still enjoy them if they are beautifully and suspenfully offered. I had not heard of this author ..... nicely penned.

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    1. It's a metaphysical fiction , thank you Helen

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  2. This reminds me that there are so many turning points in life, most go unnoticed and some are momentous. I investigated and found these telling words in the book: "I remember my “magic moment”— that instant when a “yes” or a “no” can change one’s life forever."

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  3. It's a beautiful book Penelope, one among the many by Paulo

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  4. I have read several books by Paulo but not this one though Sounds interesting

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    1. Marja, if you like the other ones you'll surely like this too

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  5. Got to be careful when "kissing princes" as there could be surprises. I like your write, sort of an inside out one.
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  6. Interesting the way you link the fairy tale with the book..not heard of this one.. but I haven't read Coelho since Alchemist.

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    1. It's already mentioned in the book , Alchemist is another favourite of mine

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  7. What a creative way to turn a fairy tale on its head incorporating a book title. :)

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  9. Anyway thanks, but as I already informed Rajani it's there in the book

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  10. Oh yes, I loved that one too! And your poem is a delight.

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  11. Nice to know that you it too and thank you Rosemary

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  12. I like the idea of prince turning into a frog. But the princess should not cry as he deserves to be what he is. Breaking of dreams is what revs up our coping mechanism.

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  14. She is crying because the prince is giving up his dreams for her ....and thank you Geetashree for your comments

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  15. True love is like that, precious and often heartbreaking--even when we get to keep it. What a wonderful girl.

    Love the title and how you used it.

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  16. Thank you Magaly for your heartfelt words

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Your genuine comments are appreciated