My unfinished doings
along with unstarted things
linger in my unfinished thoughts
weighing me down
Endlessly
Maybe some of it was
to remain like the unshed tears
in an unfinished story
of an unrequited
Love
Or maybe I be wise
get better of myself
complete this while the unfinished
tasks of other
Lifetimes
Written for Friday Writings #79
Unfinished projects
I love both the humour and seriousness of this.
ReplyDeleteAnd I love how you caught everything contained, than you Rosemary
DeleteThe stanza about unrequited love and unshed tears my favorite ... beautifully composed!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, thank you Helen
DeleteI never thought of unrequited love as an unfinished thing, but it makes so much sense...
ReplyDeleteThank you Magaly for your thoughtful comment.
ReplyDeleteunshed tears
ReplyDeletein an unfinished story
of an unrequited
Love... oh yes!
Thank you Rajani
DeleteThere will be more unfinished tasks in other lifetimes. 😄
ReplyDelete😄 Thank you LeeSan
DeleteI enjoyed your wise words. Yes, we all have unfinished business, don't we? I guess that's why we're still here. Where would one go if they finished what they set out to? How would they evolve? Very thought-provoking, Jossina :-)
ReplyDeleteI think the same. Thank you Sunra
DeleteThere will always be things that remain unfinished. It's only natural to mourn them a little, but no so much that we don't celebrate what we have done.
ReplyDeleteYeah ,we must atleast try try to be in charge as much as we can . Thank you Rommy
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