Sunday, June 4, 2023

Unfinished


My unfinished doings 

along with unstarted things

linger in my unfinished thoughts 

weighing me down 

Endlessly 


Maybe some of it was

to remain like the unshed tears 

in  an unfinished story 

of an unrequited 

Love


Or maybe I be wise 

get better of myself

complete this while the unfinished 

tasks of other 

Lifetimes 



Written for Friday Writings #79

Unfinished projects 



14 comments:

  1. I love both the humour and seriousness of this.

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    1. And I love how you caught everything contained, than you Rosemary

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  2. The stanza about unrequited love and unshed tears my favorite ... beautifully composed!

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  3. I never thought of unrequited love as an unfinished thing, but it makes so much sense...

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  4. Thank you Magaly for your thoughtful comment.

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  5. unshed tears
    in an unfinished story
    of an unrequited
    Love... oh yes!

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  6. There will be more unfinished tasks in other lifetimes. 😄

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  7. I enjoyed your wise words. Yes, we all have unfinished business, don't we? I guess that's why we're still here. Where would one go if they finished what they set out to? How would they evolve? Very thought-provoking, Jossina :-)

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  8. There will always be things that remain unfinished. It's only natural to mourn them a little, but no so much that we don't celebrate what we have done.

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    1. Yeah ,we must atleast try try to be in charge as much as we can . Thank you Rommy

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