An adventure that's you
An anxiety that's you
A prayer that's you
Oh my child
I have taken
A holiday from life
A holiday from life sounds delightful! These apparently simple, straightforward words — yet beautifully crafted — pierce my heart; at the same time I am intrigued by all the unsaid. I imagine this as a mother's response to a new child.
Some complain that modern poetry reads like a lot of private messages. This does, but I wish the parent and child well, anyway.PK
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A holiday from life sounds delightful! These apparently simple, straightforward words — yet beautifully crafted — pierce my heart; at the same time I am intrigued by all the unsaid. I imagine this as a mother's response to a new child.
ReplyDeleteSome complain that modern poetry reads like a lot of private messages. This does, but I wish the parent and child well, anyway.
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